lauraannegilman:This is the basis of good editing as well as good critiquing.  The writer creates the story, they have a reason for doing X.  If X doesn’t work, ask HOW they can make X work.(Sometimes, X just won’t work.  But the creator has to

lauraannegilman:This is the basis of good editing as well as good critiquing.  The writer creates the story, they have a reason for doing X.  If X doesn’t work, ask HOW they can make X work.(Sometimes, X just won’t work.  But the creator has to

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